Thursday, 23 April 2015

Rough Cut 3

Feedback - Chris - "The titles are used carefully here and create a professional look".

Wednesday, 22 April 2015

Rough Cut 2

Feedback - Paul - "I liked the use of generic conventions used as it made it funny".

Rough Cut 1


Jason - 'I liked the atmosphere in the pub scene as it reflects what we would probably do on a Friday night , so we could relate to it'.

Characters in our film


Characters in our film

When we were thinking of a story line, we decided that we liked the idea of the movie run fat boy run therefore when we were planning our film we decided to take notes on the stuff we liked from that film and decided that we were going to use that in our film. For example we liked the idea of this fat bloke who couldn’t run and wanted to lose weight therefore we developed this idea into a fat bloke who constantly gets bullied by his friends and therefore he wanted to do something about it.

Moreover, we decided that we were going to have one main character and two friends who used to take the mick out of him but not to the extent that he no longer wanted to be their friend. But however made him want to do something about his weight and that is where we came up with the idea that he was going to be this fat man in a pub to a man who motivated himself to lose weight and had always wanted to be a footballer and really wanted to score the winning goal. The whole opening and characters derived from the film listed above.



The main character we had in mind was the person who is sipping his pint and the two people next to him were supposed to be his friends. The fat man however will not look as old as the person shown in the image. He will be a fat man who will motivate himself in order for him to live a healthier lifestyle.
 
 
 
The two friends are going to look like the two featured in the image to the left. The image is taken from the famous TV series Only Fools and Horses. The two characters are going to be a bit slow/dumb as we believe this will be humorous for the audience.

 

 
We are going to have these characters in our opening as we believe it will create a humorous atmosphere for the audience as there will be two skinny people and one fat man in the middle who needs to lose some weight.

What we need to consider when developing our film


What we need to consider when developing our film

When developing our film we need to consider the audience beforehand. For example, due to the fact it is a comedy we need the audience to be laughing at certain things within the film. For example in the scene where we are going to have our main character struggling to run we are going to make it look like the actor is dying as this will make the audience laugh, also because it is a dark comedy the audience should laugh when they really shouldn’t be, for example the statement above. Also we need to consider the use of lighting, camera, and costume.

The type of camera angles/shots you see in a comedy;

·         The camera is very natural and follows the characters.

·         Usually high shots are used in a comedy to capture the whole event that is happening in that scene.

·         Medium shots are used in a comedy to catch all of the characters expressions within the shot.

The use of lighting is important within a comedy as you do not want a dark atmosphere as this means that it will be showing generic conventions of a horror. Therefore within a comedy, you want to see light, spacious areas to film as this is what you typically see in a comedy. Also we need to consider whether the lighting is appropriate for the audience to see it visibly. For example;






 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Costume is also another thing that we need to consider when developing our film as we do not want to use the completely wrong costumes as the audience will get confused as to what genre it is. Therefore in order for the audience to understand the genre we are going to have our actors wearing not really bright colours but a variety of different ones however our main character will be wearing black as this shows that he is the one for the audience to focus on.

Organising sound


Organising sound

 

Diegetic – WITHIN THE CLIP

When diegetic sound is concerned, we have decided to use it throughout in the form of narrative, for example at the start our character is going to order his food from the bar and say “Hi can I have some steak and chips please and can you throw in some peanuts with that…”, we decided to use this piece of dialogue as it starts the film off and shows the audience that we are located in a pub. Also, during the pub scene we have decided to use other pieces of dialogue, we are going to make the background noise so that it can faintly be heard by the audience. The background noise will consist of people talking, we have decided to use this as we believe it will be realistic whereas if we did not use it then it would not be realistic as stereotypically in a pub you can hear other people talking.

 

Non – Diegetic - OUTSIDE

The first piece of non – diegetic sound we hear is at the start when we have our production company logo appear, we have the sound of a walrus playing over the top of it, in sync with what is going on within the clip. We have used this as we believe it is effective and adds a sense of energy to the piece. Moreover, the next piece of non-diegetic sound we hear is from the part where our main actor has just been knocked out due to him running into the tree, in this piece we decided to play a piece of sound that will make the audience understand that he has just been knocked out.